Language Arts Benchmark 4.4.1 Range of Writing
- Pieces to reflect on learning and to solve problems
Hi Students!
As we talked about in class, my sister Miss Julia plays field hockey on her college team the Red Flash. They have had a difficult season so far. They have won two games and lost six games.
Last week we read about the athlete Lou Gehrig. We learned about how he was a valuable part of his team, displayed examples of sportsmanship, showed perseverance, and was modest. Using examples from the story we read, what advice would you give to Miss Julia to help her to keep working hard during her field hockey season? Write your advice in the comments below. Here is a picture of Miss Julia so you know who you're writing to:
Dear Miss. Julia,
ReplyDeleteWork hard for your next game against the team La Salle! I hope you win. Show perseverance as being the team captain!
Dear Miss Julia,
ReplyDeleteI think you should have more teamwork and perseverance. You also have a lot of sportsmanship. I think you can beat La Salle if you take my advice. Good luck Miss Julia!
from Kamalani in Miss Lilli's class
Dear Miss Julia,
ReplyDeleteYou can win by doing hard work every game. Practice makes perfect!
Practice hard every practice.
From RJ
Dear Miss Julia,
ReplyDeleteSome reasons why you should keep working hard is because even though you lost 6 games you can still work hard, show good sportsmanship and try your best. I think you are very good captain. I also think that if you show perseverance you can really win a game.
Dear Miss Julia,
ReplyDeleteYou have to have good sportsmanship if you lose. It must be hard being captain and forward. La Salle is going to lose! Just focus a little more in practices. When you retire you should probably join another sport one day not like field hockey maybe tennis.
Sincerely,
Autumn
Dear Miss Julia,
ReplyDeleteI hope all your hard work pays off. I hope you do not miss field hockey too much after you retire. I hope you like being captain. Good Luck on your game against La Salle.
Your Sister's Student,
Lily
Dear Miss Julia,
ReplyDeleteHave good sportsmanship and be a very good captain of your crew. I really hope you beat the La SALLE. Try your best and never give up on you team.
From:Sydni : )
Dear Miss Julia
ReplyDeleteYou should have more sportsmanship and good luck. Also you can score goals. Last you are a good captain.
Dear Miss Julia,
ReplyDeleteI hope you have a good game on Sunday.
On the other games I thought you were good.
I hope you keep up the good work.
Dear Miss Julia,
ReplyDeleteYou should work harder so you get more points. Another advice is to try to get the ball and shoot in the goal . You should get the ball and shoot it because your sister Lilli showed us your score and you only got to win two games . I hope you get a point and be a great captain . Have a good sportsmanship.
From, Paige
Miss Julia,
ReplyDeleteKeep on trying hard. Is it hard being a captain?
Dear Miss Julia,
ReplyDeleteI am in your sister's class. I think you should have perseverance, determination, and sportsmanship. I hope you do well in the next game you play. Good luck!!!! Sending my best luck your way.
From, Izumi
Dear, Miss Julia,
ReplyDeleteGood Luck on your games! Please keep on practicing! Keep up the hard work! Don't give up! Please show good sportsmanship!
Dear Miss Julia,
ReplyDeleteI hope that you can beat La Salle at field hockey. You just need perseverance, confidence, and sportsmanship.
Dear Miss Julia,
ReplyDeleteGood luck Miss Julia on your game on Sunday! Hopefully you would win and beat La Salle so it could be 3 wins good luck on your game. I wonder if you are going to win. Good luck and keep practicing so you don't have to retire. Good luck!
Dear,Miss. Julia
ReplyDeleteDon't give up. Help your friends and keep practicing. When are you retiring? How many people are there on the team? I am in your sister's class! GOOD LUCK on your games.
GOOD LUCK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Alyssa
Dear, Miss Julia,
ReplyDeleteI heard you are going to retire next season. Is field hockey fun because
I might try out next season. I will have good sportsmanship like you did.
Are you really the captain of you team? I heard you are going to challenge
La Salle well good luck! Have a nice last season!
Love, Zaysha-Lei
Dear Miss Julia,
ReplyDeleteGood for you that you are playing field hockey. Please don't retire field hockey.
Your Friend, Michael
Dear Miss Julia,
ReplyDeleteWork hard for your next game against La Salle. Do your best and I hope you win the field hockey game!
Dear, Mrs. Julia
ReplyDeleteDon't give up. One day your sister put on you and your team up on our screen. You guys were playing. Also My whole class and I think you guys are great, also you are a great captain to your team. Next, GOOD LUCK one day I hope Mrs. Lilli puts you guys on again , score a goal for your sister and us.
GOOD LUCK!!!!!!!!!!!
Crimson in your sister's class
Dear Miss Julia
ReplyDeleteMy name is Tex. I heard you have good sportsmanship. I wonder if you can come to Palisades when you retire next season. You look young in the picture. Try your best.
Dear, Miss Julia I'm sorry your team lost 6 games. Is field hockey fun? Try Harder to win more games. I can tell you show great sportsmanship! Never give up and have a good season.
ReplyDeleteDear miss Julia,
ReplyDeleteI heard about your game between La Salle. So, work hard and good luck! Keep trying!
Dear Miss Julia,
ReplyDeleteHere's some advice for Field Hocke: Have good sportsmanship. You guys could keep trying and never ever give up. Good luck for your team.
Dear, Miss Julia
ReplyDeleteI am in your sister's class. She is really fun. She lets us paint and color. I think you guys are doing a great job. From now on I think you guys are going to win. I think you guys are going to keep on persevering.
Dear, Miss Julia
ReplyDeleteI heard you are going to retire next season. Is field hockey fun because
I might try out next season.I will have good sportsmanship like you.Are you really the team captain?I heard you are going to challenge La Salle well
good luck.Have a nice last season!
Love, zaysha